Review for: As the Dagger Thrusts Home
reviewed by Cheryl Conley

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By: Francois Robert	Nicely written. Drew me in further as I read along. Misspelling of 'forest' in first paragraph threw me off. Mixed use of capitalization/spelling for Forrest/Forest and Grandfather Tree/tree took away from story as it prevents a steady read. GREAT twist at end when prime character is found not to be the victim. Thank you, Chris....
By: Nataliya Maize	It sounds really good so far. I havn't gotten to chance to finish reading it all, but from I've read so far it sounds great!...
By: Lynn Cromarty	Good. Some bits I liked, but some parts lost me a little and I had to re-read. Generally well writen, with good structure....
By: DrLarz	Gotta agree; pretty fun to read and leaves you wanting more....
By: Wyatt	Interesting story. I enjoyed the human versus elf aspect of it and the train of thought ("as the dagger thrust home..." weaving its way through the underlying story. However, the writing itself needs maturing. Sentence structure, some of the descriptive phrases you use, and transitions between the action need to be polished....
By: Alan	that is nice and dark...
By: AZ Ranger	Reminds me of Lord of the Rings. Well written, Good start for a novel....

Date: 02-24-2009 01:08 pm
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I like the concept.