Review for: Meal Ticket
reviewed by Mike Wray

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By: monkeysWriting

To be honest, I couldn’t finish the story. I read about half the story, at that point I thought that the airline was going to cook the main character and serve him in-flight. I jumped to the end to find out. The ending was a little different than I thought it would be, and less sinister; it seems like what happened was just a turn of fate and not planned. The airline seemed like it had something planned for him, now I wonder why they were being so nice. Also I wonder if the story might move faster if you started it with him getting on the plane rather than all the hotel stuff. ...

Date: 04-14-2009 11:05 am
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I didn't mind the flow of the story. There were times with all the excitement of the plane going down I thought there could be a little more realism. OVerall, not a bad effort.

Review for: Meal Ticket reviewed by Mike Wray

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Review for: Meal Ticket
reviewed by Mike Wray