Review for: Justa and the Victorian Rogue
reviewed by Leslie tollefson

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By: blueninja

The dialogue is all right, but the combat is..well, it ain't there. "Before he could...it was all over"? Blindfolded and against gorgon things? and it is all over before a wizard can tie a blindfold? That just cheats the reader out the story. It has potential, but you need to go back in and write some action so the reader can get involved with the characters....

Date: 05-01-2009 07:20 pm
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Unbelievably cool!Gorgon thing is a little stiff though. Down loaded whole thing on Kindle. (Now you have to read mine when I'm done.)

Review for: Justa and the Victorian Rogue reviewed by Leslie tollefson

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Review for: Justa and the Victorian Rogue
reviewed by Leslie tollefson