Review for: Hands
reviewed by Peter Tambroni

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By: Anna	Interesting start. would like to read the rest....
By: pappaheat	Interesting, original premise and well written to boot. Nice job....
By: Kattnasty	delightful thanks and please post more stories ...
By: Wyatt	I like it. Sweet and so aptly describes those rare moments in our lives when something unusual crosses our paths and we are faced with a choice. He could have leapt over the counter... but, alas, life is not a movie....
By: William C Montgomery	Cute vignette. Love at first sight? Can it be love if the feeling is unilateral? Can it be true love if it is solely based on appearances (of the hand or otherwise)? Rational or no, life is full of such experiences. Hemingway didn't like the name Ernest either. But it works here to establish that this is a common, socially awkward man....
By: Feral Forager	The visuals conjured by the stream of hands is a true change up; a nice encapsulation of transient novelty in the face of the banal....
By: Clare	I loved the title--could see the scene in a movie--ahh, but life is not one--too bad, then we could rewind and change things and fast forward and skip the bad parts....
By: R.T. Ratliff	Great though provoking story....

Date: 06-09-2009 05:51 am
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Your writing has an amazing flow to it. I too would like to read more of this.. Although I don't really like the name Ernest :)