Review for: Justa and the Victorian Rogue
reviewed by Christopher Huff


Date: 06-10-2009 05:01 pm
Score:

The dialogue is all right, but the combat is..well, it ain't there. "Before he could...it was all over"? Blindfolded and against gorgon things? and it is all over before a wizard can tie a blindfold? That just cheats the reader out the story. It has potential, but you need to go back in and write some action so the reader can get involved with the characters.