Review for: As the Dagger Thrusts Home
reviewed by Wyatt Tremblay


Date: 07-11-2009 04:27 pm
Score:

Interesting story. I enjoyed the human versus elf aspect of it and the train of thought ("as the dagger thrust home..." weaving its way through the underlying story. However, the writing itself needs maturing. Sentence structure, some of the descriptive phrases you use, and transitions between the action need to be polished.