Review for: Misscha and the Dark Shaman
reviewed by Ken Bivin

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By: mwray	I like how you developed the connection between the characters. Very good....
By: uripeleg	Very nice story. I don't think cats are really like that but it is very enjoyable to read :)...
By: Rob	Some small errors at the start put me off this piece. IMO, the opening of a story needs to be the absolute best it can be, otherwise readers (including myself) won't read on. If it is aimed at children, it needs to have a bit more pace. ...
By: blueninja	Interesting. I have always enjoyed "cat" stories. ...
By: Michael Steele	Excellent story, although the writing is awkward--English is not your native language? This chapter does an excellent job of establishing Misscha's identity as an exceptional cat in a dreary setting. The dreams and the "trash" drop-off are good teasers, and I wonder if there is a connection between the shadow capture in the dream world and the drop-off? Perhaps the entity captured in the dream is brought to Misscha by other supernatural forces... I worry about the old woman and her loneliness, and for Misscha's future if something happens to the woman. Perhaps the story develops in such a way that the woman can join Misscha in the dream world?...
By: Richard Mahogany	Andre, I really want to know what happens next. I think there are a lot of good descriptors here, but more action could benefit the story, taking me along for the ride... Thanks for sharing....

Date: 08-29-2009 05:35 pm
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Excellent chapter. Descriptions of location are very good. The teasing introduction of a mystery villain makes you want to learn more.