Review for: Misscha and the Dark Shaman
reviewed by Michael Steele
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Date: 11-01-2009 02:39 pm
Score: 




Excellent story, although the writing is awkward--English is not your native language? This chapter does an excellent job of establishing Misscha's identity as an exceptional cat in a dreary setting. The dreams and the "trash" drop-off are good teasers, and I wonder if there is a connection between the shadow capture in the dream world and the drop-off? Perhaps the entity captured in the dream is brought to Misscha by other supernatural forces...
I worry about the old woman and her loneliness, and for Misscha's future if something happens to the woman. Perhaps the story develops in such a way that the woman can join Misscha in the dream world?
