Review for: The Graces of Brantley
reviewed by Anton Jiracek


Date: 11-16-2009 10:33 pm
Score:

I agree, some editing of this draft will do nicely. I liked all the factual information you included in this work, along with the descriptions. Now, you need to add some suspense to the piece, and perhaps more descriptions of the settings (red skies, etc enhance the mood). Nicely put.