Review for: BoT: Chapter Four
reviewed by Anton Jiracek
Other Reviews
This story has not been reviewed.
Date: 11-30-2009 09:48 pm
Score: 
Not a bad story at all, however I am lost on most of the details. You must include your first two chapters, and it will make more sense to the readers. Thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading the previous chapters. Very imaginative!