Review for: The Graces of Brantley
reviewed by Tessa Novak

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By: Barry Thimble	I agree, some editing of this draft will do nicely. I liked all the factual information you included in this work, along with the descriptions. Now, you need to add some suspense to the piece, and perhaps more descriptions of the settings (red skies, etc enhance the mood). Nicely put....
By: DrLarz	I'm certain this is a draft and as such needs some editing. I did however enjoy it (some flow issues in spots). Look forward to seeing the post edit version....

Date: 01-07-2010 10:30 am
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Fascinating! Made me think of Jack Vance.