Review for: Gothic Sunset
reviewed by Douglas Beagley

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By: mwray	Wow - fabulous! Great characters - I felt I knew them pretty well at the end of the story. Nice job....
By: C.T. Johnson	Interesting tale with some potentially interesting characters. There are numerous occasions where adjectives were misused and there are too many Hollywood-style cliches. The opening which examines the dark, rough, untamable, and dangerous qualities of the simple metropolitan artery, the alleyway, starts out intriguing, but you fail to use it completely as a tool. The story overall lacks polish, but there's some good foundation here. ...

Date: 01-28-2009 09:46 am
Score:

Terrific grammar and smooth, well-written sentences. A penchant for cliche and heavy drama.