Fantasy -
Justa and the Victorian Rogue
by Lawrence Scariano
PG




0 comments 734 views Tags:
fantasy, adventure, ned kelly, warriors Date Published: 04-30-2009




0 comments 734 views Tags:
fantasy, adventure, ned kelly, warriors Date Published: 04-30-2009
Justa and the Victorian Rogue
by Lawrence Scariano
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Review By: blueninja
The dialogue is all right, but the combat is..well, it ain't there. "Before he could...it was all over"? Blindfolded and against gorgon things? and it is all over before a wizard can tie a blindfold? That just cheats the reader out the story.
It has potential, but you need to go back in and write some action so the reader can get involved with the characters.
