SciFi -
STRANGER FROM THE FUTURE
by Vip Malixi
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8 comments 3767 views Tags:
sci-fi, philosophy, the future, civilization Date Published: 01-27-2009




8 comments 3767 views Tags:
sci-fi, philosophy, the future, civilization Date Published: 01-27-2009
STRANGER FROM THE FUTURE
by Vip Malixi
Recent Reviews
Review By: Jerran Wolf
This is an interesting idea, but I feel like it needs to be developed more. It seems to stop abruptly, just as you'd expect the story to unfold. Right now, it seems more like a conversation, rather than a developing plot. Also, Maila seems to be too well adjusted. If time travel is not normal where she's from, should she be more unsettled and shocked at the reality of being transported back in time?
